188******15 2018-02-19
<span></span> <span class="strong" style="font-weight:bold;" id="id1"></span><span class="red strong" style="color:#e8554d;font-weight:bold;" id="id2"></span><span class="red" style="color:#e8554d;" id="id4"></span><span class="red strong" style="color:#e8554d;font-weight:bold;" id="id5"></span><span class="red" style="color:#e8554d;" id="id6"></span><span id="id7"></span><span class="strong" style="font-weight:bold;" id="id8">本文的语言描写过于多,情景描写有些缺少。且男性角色的塑造不太成功,说话过于女性化。</span>